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learning – Year 4 – 28th September 2012
This
week we have been writing reports about World War II in response to our trip on
Tuesday. For homework I would like you
to either improve the paragraph below, improve the sentences further down or write a report about something of your choice (something that really
inspires you).
If
you are improving you could add
punctuation, words such as “because” and phrases to make it
sound better.
If
you are writing your own, don’t forget introduction, subheadings, writing in paragraphs and a summary.
1.
Improve this
paragraph
in world war 2 they did
washing on a monday they used lots of different tools like a dolly a potter and
a mangle they didn’t have washing
machines they had a clothes horse to dry
the clothes on a dolly was used to move
the clothes around in the hot water a potter was used to push the clothes down
a mangle was used to squeeze the clothes dry it was much harder than today.
Or
Improve these sentences
a mangle was used to
squeeze the clothes dry
they did washing on a
monday
it was much harder than
today
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